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Saturday, 02.04.2012 |
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Product Details
Notes
good story
at first, the flashbacks seem kinda awkward
but as the story progresses, it becomes an interesting technique
because he leads into each flashback with a connecting line
often the line of dialogue connects the two scenes
i like it better when he switches at a chapter ending
the concept itself is original
the action is pretty good overall
i think the beginning was the slowest
the middle was probably the best
and the ending was decent
as usual, he acknowledges a ton of people so he really does his research
it comes through, though i don't personally need that much detail to enjoy it
overall it was a good story |
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